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xx Ok, going to try my hand at a fanfic...
« Thread started on: Apr 4th, 2006, 03:30am »

Six Heroes Meet a Dragon, Two Enemies Team Up

Long ago, in a galaxy far away...

A stargate is undergoing a major malfunction, giving the ship in it, a rather bumpy ride.

The Captain yells, "Stabilize the ship!"

A robot says, "Stabilizing, Captain."

As the other crew hold on for dear life, or get thrown around, the ship stabilizing is a welcome change.

The ship exits the stargate, the Captain says "Report!"

The robot says, "We are in in orbit around a planet, it has many life forms, including numerous intelligent ones."
"We are also scanning a strange energy source, of unknown origin."

The Captain-"Keep scanning, I want to know where we are and what that energy is."

Meanwhile, on the planet, one of the Dragon elders feels something strange.
He seeks out Spyro, who is still recovering from defeating Red.

Spyro-"Hi Magnus! What's up?"

Magnus-"Something odd is nearby, I don't know what it is, but one of them is a telepath."
"I can feel it."

Spyro-"Any idea who or what he is is?"

Magnus-"Not he, she."

The Professor rushes over, "Spyro!!!"

Spyro-"Calm down, Professor, now what's up with you?"

Professor-"A large ship is in orbit around our world."
"Heavily armed and armored."

Spyro-"I hope they are friendly..."

Magnus-"That's where the telepath is."

Spyro-"Professsor, see if you can contact them, ok?"

Professsor-"Now why didn't I thinkof that..."

He rushes offf.

(End of part one)


What do you all think so far?
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« Reply #1 on: Apr 4th, 2006, 05:01am »

It's a good story! grin Can you post more?
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« Reply #2 on: Apr 4th, 2006, 1:08pm »

Part 2...

On the ship, the Captain, a fox, notices one of the crew, a vixen, has an odd look.

Fox McCloud-"Krystal, you all right?"

Krystal-"There is someone on that world who is telepathic, Fox."
"You and I should go down there."

Falco-"What about us?"

Fox-"Stay here, for now."

Falco grunts in frustration.

Fox and Krystal go down to the Arwing hangar, and head out, toward where Krystal guides them.

Back on the surface, Magnus says, "They're on their way here, don't worry Spyro, they're friendly."

Spyro-"They better be, or they are going to get cooked."

The professor walks out, as they see both Arwings approaching.

Spyro-"I like those ships."

(To be continued...)
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« Reply #3 on: Apr 5th, 2006, 12:27am »

More! more! smiley
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« Reply #4 on: Apr 5th, 2006, 01:10am »

Part 3...

The 2 Arwings land, Fox and Krystal get out.

Seeing the 2 dragons, Fox says, "Sharpclaws!"
He starts to bring out his blaster.

Krystal-"No Fox, they aren't Sharpclaws."
She puts her hand on Fox's blaster.

Fox-"You sure?" "Ok..."
Fox takes his hand off his blaster.

Magnus walks over to Krystal, "You're the telepath I sensed."

Krystal-"Yes, I am."
"What's your name, and your little friend here?"

Magnus-"I'm Magnus, and this is Spyro, our greatest hero."

Spyro gets a little embarrased. "Magnus..."

Fox-"I'm Fox McCloud, and this is my wife, Krystal."

Fox walks over near Spyro.
"So you're a hero, Spyro?"
"The Lylat system people say I am too."
"I don't think so, myself, I just do my job."

Krystal-"You're MY hero, Fox."
She hugs him.

Spyro-"Never heard of the place, now what are you doing here?"

Fox-"We ran into some odd interference in a stargate, and the Great Fox 2 ended up here."
"Funny, we never had any trouble with a stargate before."
"It was like something else was in it too."
"Something we couldn't see."

Spyro-"What's a Sharpclaw?"

Krystal-"Old enemies of ours, Spyro."
"They look a little like you dragons."

Spyro-"Our enemies are the Gnorcs."
"Stupid and brutal."

Fox smiles, "Sounds like the Sharpclaws."

The professor meanwhile is gazing on Fox and Krystal, and he gets an odd look when he sees Krystal.
"Excuse me Krystal, your friend Fox is of normal color, but I've never seen a vixen with the color fur you have."

Krystal smiles, "I'm from Cerinia, Professor, all of us had blue fur."
She gets a sad look, "I just wish Andross hadn't destroyed my world."

Spyro-"Who's Andross?"

Fox-"An evil ape, I killed the jerk."
He hugs Krystal sympathetically.

Spyro-"Good!"
"Anyone who destroys a whole world deserves to die."

Fox-"You really are a feisty one, Spyro."

Spyro-"You bet your tail!"

Magnus-"Ok, c'mon all of you, let's get something to eat."

Spyro-"I bet Moneybags overcharged you for the food, Magnus."

Magnus leads them to a picnic table, "You think he wouldn't?"

They all laugh.

Meanwhile...
In the Professor's lab, the tiny Red vanishes out of his jar.
He reappears, in Gnasty Gnorc's old lair, at his normal size.

Red-"What is going on around here?"

To be continued....
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« Reply #5 on: Apr 5th, 2006, 01:23am »

Oooooo...any more?
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« Reply #6 on: Apr 5th, 2006, 1:14pm »

Man I'm horrible at fanfics. i'm Bad at writing period. Everyone else is so good. Nice Job. wink
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« Reply #7 on: Apr 5th, 2006, 2:21pm »

on Apr 5th, 2006, 1:14pm, Oryps wrote:
Man I'm horrible at fanfics. i'm Bad at writing period. Everyone else is so good. Nice Job. wink


Thanks.
To quote PT Barnum, "You ain't seen nothing yet!" smiley
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« Reply #8 on: Apr 6th, 2006, 11:24pm »

Part 4...

In Gnasty Gnorc's old lair, Red looks around and sees what could a shadow, but appears to struggling into some form of existence.
Using the power of his remaining Dark Gem, Red completely re-forms the person.

The person is nearly as tall as Red, reptilian and wearing armor.
He also has two vicious-looking hooks instead of a left hand.

"You have my gratitude, dragon, I am General Scales."

Red-"I can tell you have evil in your heart as well as I do, and a desire for revenge, as I do also."

Scales-"Yes, revenge on the fox!"

Red-"But we will have to do this subtle, not charge into this like you would."
"We will need an ally, someone close to Spyro, but willing to help us..."

Red kicks the bones of Gnasty Gnorc out of the way.
"Brutal, but useful, to a point."
Red then finds a half-broken Dark Gem, and uses it to observe Spyro and his friends having lunch with Fox and Krystal.

Scales snarls in anger, seeing Fox.

Red-"As I said, we must be subtle, perhaps this one may be approachable..."
The image shows Flame, he looks frustrated.

Red-"Yes, this one is envious of the acclaim Spyro has, he will do nicely."

The image in the Dark Gem fades.

Red concentrates, and his form shifts, changing to a dragon small like Spyro and Flame.
"Now to go seek my prey."

Scales-"I like your style."

Red-"I will return soon."
"Clean this place up a bit will you?"

Scales' anger flares, "I am no maidservant!"
But then his body is racked by intense pain.

Red-"You are mine, now."

Scales' pain subsides.
"I will obey."
He thinks to himself, "For now."

Red leaves the lair, disguised as a young dragon.

To be continued...
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« Reply #9 on: Apr 7th, 2006, 05:37am »

cool more! cheesy
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« Reply #10 on: Apr 7th, 2006, 09:24am »

on Apr 5th, 2006, 2:21pm, Archae wrote:
Thanks.
To quote PT Barnum, "You ain't seen nothing yet!" smiley


I like your confidence. Nice job. wink
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« Reply #11 on: Apr 14th, 2006, 09:07am »

More!
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« Reply #12 on: Jul 17th, 2006, 04:56am »

Mmmmm.... Archae hasn't been online since. cry
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