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« Thread started on: Dec 19th, 2005, 3:53pm »

My first fanfic. This is how I think Red became evil.

30 years before Spyro the dragon was born, A young male dragon named Red was the realms great hero. But something happened to him that changed him forever ! grin
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« Reply #1 on: Dec 19th, 2005, 3:54pm »

I forgot mention that that was just the preview! rolleyes
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« Reply #2 on: Dec 19th, 2005, 5:17pm »

Okay, here is the actual beginning...

" Tayla, not right now" Red said as he walked over to the Doctors research facility. " But it's amazing Red , You could even pick out one of those diamond gems for our engagement rings. " " How many times have I told you that we aren' t engaged" Red said, annoyed. " Not unless I can convince the elders" Tayla said, keeping her happy attitude. " Look, MAYBE I 'll go with you after my meeting with the Doc., okay. " He said and walked in the large mettalic building in front of them. Tayla sighed and began to walk away.

So there is the beginning! cheesy
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« Reply #3 on: Dec 19th, 2005, 6:47pm »

Tayla: Like Ember except with Red

" What's up doc" ? Red joked as he entered the Doctor's research facility. "HaHa very funny" the Doctor said sarcasticly. The Doc turned on a screen and a large black dragon appeared on the screen. "That is Darkness. He and his army have invaded the realms. His minions are infused with dark gem energy, so is he. It makes them even more powerful! " the Doc. almost screamed. "Well, why cant we use dark gem energy" ? Red suggested. " ARE YOU MAD !!! THE POWER WOULD OVER TAKE YOU, YOU WOULD BE EVIL!!!!!" the Doctor burst out. "Okay, sorry, well, I guess I'm off'' Red said and charged right out the door to come face to face with...
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« Reply #4 on: Dec 20th, 2005, 7:07pm »

Tayla. "So you ready to go?" she asked. "Where, oh yeah, well" but before he could finish, Tayla grabbed his paw and he was being dragged into a nearby cave.
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« Reply #5 on: Dec 21st, 2005, 07:05am »

You should put all that in ONE post, instead of spamming the board. Or put it up on another site and just pop the link here.
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« Reply #6 on: Jan 3rd, 2006, 12:02pm »

Tayla halted at the end of the cave. "So where is this place Tayla" Red asked. Then Tayla pointed to a small hole and said "Through here''. They crawled through the hole until it ended, and what they saw amazed them.
There were sparkling diamond gems In a shallow pool of water, with silver and gold fish. A small plesiosaur, with colors of red,blue, and purple swam gracefully in the pool . Small trees surrounded the area, and the sun seemed brighter here.
"Wow" Red said. "Yeap" Tayla said. "Found it the other day" Tayla said, starting to lean against Red. Red imadeilatley side-stepped. "Well see ya later, I have a world to save."

1 day later
Red walked into the ice covered arena. This was it. He'd made it to Darkness' lair. Red scanned the area, no one was their. "Maybe this is the wrong place'',Red said to himself . Unfortnutley, he was wrong. Suddenly ,the glass above the arena shattered. On the icy floor, stood a large black dragon. "So, you are the little pest trying to foil my plans" He spat. "I expected you to be nearly as good looking as me." Red said. " You'll regret that young dragon"Darkness calmly replyed, at that moment, Darkness swiped his tail at Red. Luckily, Red leaped into the air and struck Darkness with a horn dive. Darkness recovered quickly, and flew up into the air. With a wave of his hand he sent a blast of dark energy towards the ice. A crack was heard and the ice started to fall apart into the pit it was being suspended above by ropes. Red couldn't fly yet, so he went to the edge. The door to the arena was knocked down by another red dragon, unlike Red, this dragon had white spikes and horns. "Boy Pyro, what took you?" Red asked, annoyed with his brother. "Some gnorcs wanted trouble so I gave it them."The ice stopped right at their claws. "Do as I do " Pyro shouted. At that moment, Pyro shot a fireball at Darkness' right wing. Red did the same with the left wing. Darkness' wings were now burnt off, and as he fell into the pit, he screamed "I will have my revenge!!!" " Well , now that that's over with, let's go home." Red said. "Aren't you worried about what he said?" Pyro asked. "No, I can beat him any day." Red said as they began to walk back to the Dragon Village.

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« Reply #7 on: Jun 2nd, 2006, 8:14pm »

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!Sounds kool, but one Question......what age is Red and his bro!!! tongue

I'm actually writin' a story like this ma-self, eccept it's much longer, like a novel!

1 more thing buga, IT'S A GOOD THOERY HOW RED TURNED EVIL!!! cool

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« Reply #8 on: Jun 3rd, 2006, 03:16am »

on Jun 2nd, 2006, 8:14pm, Spyroflamesredsbum!!! wrote:
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!Sounds kool, but one Question......what age is Red and his bro!!! tongue

I'm actually writin' a story like this ma-self, eccept it's much longer, like a novel!

1 more thing buga, IT'S A GOOD THOERY HOW RED TURNED EVIL!!! cool

O O
<The yellow glowing eyes of Red scare you!!!


Sheesh, you really got to stop using the word 'bugga'. It's annoying.

And you better not degrade any fanfics of other people... Hey, I know you had better stories, and you always seem to comment about it in other Red discussions o_O

Anyways...

I was hoping that this was a real fanfic, like a long one like the ones in fanfiction.net. Woot, I really lack some Spyro fanfics this month...
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« Reply #9 on: Jun 3rd, 2006, 06:28am »

on Jun 3rd, 2006, 03:16am, Zekira the drago-human wrote:
Sheesh, you really got to stop using the word 'bugga'. It's annoying.

And you better not degrade any fanfics of other people... Hey, I know you had better stories, and you always seem to comment about it in other Red discussions o_O


Um yeah..........wat does DEGRADE mean!!!?? O_o I Donno cheesy
But yeah I though my 'BUGGA'S would maybe get on people'z nerves, but i cant help it, IM AUSY MATE!!!

PS Nice story thing saurianboy.......again -_-
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« Reply #10 on: Jun 3rd, 2006, 07:15am »

zakira, what does the z with dots on it mean?
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« Reply #11 on: Jun 3rd, 2006, 6:47pm »

on Jun 3rd, 2006, 07:15am, Guest-ih8u2 wrote:
zakira, what does the z with dots on it mean?


[i] [i/] OK Um... Why don't you register? rolleyes Because this is an unecessary question that should be asked through PM, and only members can send PM grin

Oh and I just read through the fanfic and...

Quite needs more details, but good idea on a story though, but name ideas aren't that good (Darkness? WTF?). But sure, you can prolong this as much as you want. As long as it gets done and over with tongue Seriously though, I'm interested at the future of this fanfic.
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« Reply #12 on: Jun 3rd, 2006, 7:09pm »

on Jun 3rd, 2006, 6:47pm, Zekira the drago-human wrote:
[i] [i/] OK Um... Why don't you register? rolleyes Because this is an unecessary question that should be asked through PM, and only members can send PM grin

Oh and I just read through the fanfic and...

Quite needs more details, but good idea on a story though, but name ideas aren't that good (Darkness? WTF?). But sure, you can prolong this as much as you want. As long as it gets done and over with tongue Seriously though, I'm interested at the future of this fanfic.


sorry, i don't know much board etiquette and i don't feel like registering just to ask that one dumb question.

n e way, so far so good in terms of plot and dialogue, but the story could b more captivating with more description of the characters/setting and a little more detail.
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« Reply #13 on: Jun 4th, 2006, 12:50am »

I still dont know wat DEGRADE meanz XD
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« Reply #14 on: Jun 4th, 2006, 03:10am »

I think I used the word DEGRADE wrongly... Hahaha, sorry. It was supposed to be somewhat like... OH I REMEMBER THE WORD NOW, Sarcastisizing! grin

Yeah, it could've been A LOT better with the details. I like the idea of the story.
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