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diane
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« Reply #90 on: Jun 28th, 2006, 10:24pm »

my storys better then urs, brenden!!!

spyro n emrer went to the bathtub n had sexx again!! then spyro sed \"i love u emberr\" ember sed that she wanted 2 have sum more hot sexx so they did!!

then syro went 2 the stor n saw ANOTHER DRAGON!! N SHE WAS SLEEPIN WIT FLAME!!

spyro assked to join n they sed \"yes\"

so psyro has sexx with both of them!!!

ember came alog and saw spyro \"how could uuuu!!!!!!\" she yelled! then she beet him up
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« Reply #91 on: Jun 29th, 2006, 09:07am »

on Jun 28th, 2006, 10:24pm, Guest-diane wrote:
my storys better then urs, brenden!!!

spyro n emrer went to the bathtub n had sexx again!! then spyro sed \"i love u emberr\" ember sed that she wanted 2 have sum more hot sexx so they did!!

then syro went 2 the stor n saw ANOTHER DRAGON!! N SHE WAS SLEEPIN WIT FLAME!!

spyro assked to join n they sed \"yes\"

so psyro has sexx with both of them!!!

ember came alog and saw spyro \"how could uuuu!!!!!!\" she yelled! then she beet him up

*CoughIPbanCough*>_>

On a different subject.
Come on Eon you don't need to be so harsh!

Now listen Brandon I'm gonna have to agree with eon that you didn't put much effort into your story. But who cares? just put some effort into it and I'm sure you could do a good job. wink
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ih8u2 b lazee
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« Reply #92 on: Jun 29th, 2006, 3:27pm »

on Jun 29th, 2006, 09:07am, Spyro wrote:
*CoughIPbanCough*>_>

On a different subject.
Come on Eon you don't need to be so harsh!

Now listen Brandon I'm gonna have to agree with eon that you didn't put much effort into your story. But who cares? just put some effort into it and I'm sure you could do a good job. wink


Total agreement. Brandon, your story would be ten times better if you fleshed out the detail and used quotes and grammar. It would seem like a more serious story and can be taken more seriously as art. And please, do not end the chapter mid sentence. The chapter has to end on something of a conclusive note, even if it ends in a cliffhanger.

And diane, if you are old enough to know what "sexx" means, you should at least know how to spam. I feel like you're flaming/mocking serious fanfic writers. And besides that, it's annoying.
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ih8u2 b lazee
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« Reply #93 on: Jun 29th, 2006, 3:28pm »

on Jun 29th, 2006, 3:27pm, Guest-ih8u2 b lazee wrote:
And diane, if you are old enough to know what "sexx" means, you should at least know how to spell. I feel like you're flaming/mocking serious fanfic writers. And besides that, it's annoying.


slight error
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storm
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« Reply #94 on: Jun 29th, 2006, 4:34pm »

you people are funny grin
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diane
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« Reply #95 on: Jun 29th, 2006, 4:40pm »

u guys are soooooo meen!!!

im gonna tell the admins aboutu!!


now reed my netx stroy

spyro n emberr where stting on te ground then spyr sed "lets have sexx!!"

ember sed ok then they had sexx in the water but flame came up n saw

i am soo jealous spryo" sed the orenge dagron so he had hott sexx wit ember 2!!

spyri then cam un p sed that shed have sexx wit spyrp so spryo sed yes

then tehy all has hott sexx togethee!!!
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Brandon Lazy
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« Reply #96 on: Jun 29th, 2006, 6:45pm »

ha ha ha very funny diane you don't have to make fun of me I''m, 13 so what that I stink I still need to do some spelling corrections and details, well i guess I can Update now or tommorow if that bother's you guys. All this talk makes me wanna cry. cry
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Jake
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« Reply #97 on: Jun 29th, 2006, 6:59pm »

If it makes you fell any better I was bad at my story too.
So there is no reason to cry. Oh and storm don't laugh it breaks people's fellings, hmm Eon that's disrespectful why can't anyone be nice, Diane *shudder* I don't even wanna think about sex.

well i guess my work is done here, see you later!
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Brandon Gone Rage of Lazy
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« Reply #98 on: Jun 29th, 2006, 7:30pm »

No that does not make me feel better it makes wanna punch people here *gritting teeth* This makes me so mad that people can't get along. You know i kinda wanna swear but oh well! *coming down* and huh there are more guests coming in I can almost say all of them.
Back to Rage

Are new Guest Eon which I hate the most!
diane, that innapropiate speller!
V, that guy that makes fun of people sometimes!
Are Spammer's Dildo, Reel Thug, Kiss me meedee and rerew and asda they are such a * beep*!!!!!!!!!
Emerald and Jake I have nothing to say to them they are good people
Anne of Dragons, meh
Go Spyro, That intensive Spyro lover maniac!
Storm, That inapropiate guest.
and the other's that I don't know are fine!
That's How I FEEL! angry
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ih8u2 b lazee
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« Reply #99 on: Jun 29th, 2006, 9:14pm »

on Jun 29th, 2006, 7:30pm, Guest-Brandon Gone Rage of Lazy wrote:
No that does not make me feel better it makes wanna punch people here *gritting teeth* This makes me so mad that people can't get along. You know i kinda wanna swear but oh well! *coming down* and huh there are more guests coming in I can almost say all of them.
Back to Rage

Are new Guest Eon which I hate the most!
diane, that innapropiate speller!
V, that guy that makes fun of people sometimes!
Are Spammer's Dildo, Reel Thug, Kiss me meedee and rerew and asda they are such a * beep*!!!!!!!!!
Emerald and Jake I have nothing to say to them they are good people
Anne of Dragons, meh
Go Spyro, That intensive Spyro lover maniac!
Storm, That inapropiate guest.
and the other's that I don't know are fine!
That's How I FEEL! angry


Sorry you feel mad, dude. But some people who were criticizing probably didn't want to make you angry. They may have just been trying to help. I didn't mean to anger you, and if I did, sorry. And the spammers are probably one annoying person. Keep writing your story. Just work on it.
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« Reply #100 on: Jun 30th, 2006, 08:53am »

on Jun 29th, 2006, 7:30pm, Guest-Brandon Gone Rage of Lazy wrote:
No that does not make me feel better it makes wanna punch people here *gritting teeth* This makes me so mad that people can't get along. You know i kinda wanna swear but oh well! *coming down* and huh there are more guests coming in I can almost say all of them.
Back to Rage

Are new Guest Eon which I hate the most!
diane, that innapropiate speller!
V, that guy that makes fun of people sometimes!
Are Spammer's Dildo, Reel Thug, Kiss me meedee and rerew and asda they are such a * beep*!!!!!!!!!
Emerald and Jake I have nothing to say to them they are good people
Anne of Dragons, meh
Go Spyro, That intensive Spyro lover maniac!
Storm, That inapropiate guest.
and the other's that I don't know are fine!
That's How I FEEL! angry


I'm really just trying to help Brandon. I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings. sad Ih8u2 is right. Most of the time spammers will change their names but their really just the same person being a S*** head.
Just Ignore him/her.
Think of it this way, if they're acting like total jerks then they're not worth your time of day. They probably grew up in a disfunctional home and feel they need to take their feeling out on someone. Your just their scapegoat. There's nothing wrong with you.
I think your a nice person. wink
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Brandon Happy lazy
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« Reply #101 on: Jun 30th, 2006, 11:03am »

Well I guess that's okay
but how would you like my story like this:

Spyro: What's going around here!

Then a cloaked figure came out.

or the one i used last time
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ih8u2 b lazee
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« Reply #102 on: Jun 30th, 2006, 11:08am »

on Jun 30th, 2006, 11:03am, Guest-Brandon Happy lazy wrote:
Well I guess that's okay
but how would you like my story like this:

Spyro: What's going around here!

Then a cloaked figure came out.

or the one i used last time


Just written like a normal story is cool.
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Brandon Gone Lazy
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« Reply #103 on: Jun 30th, 2006, 1:34pm »

All right, very well
TEXT
Chapter 3: The long journey

Spyro, Sparx and Brandon were walking together until Spyro finally spoke, How long will it take? About 3 days Spyro just be patient, oh and may I remind you that once we enter the Spooky forest we might cross dangerous monster's that you never seen. That seems creapy said Sparx. Ahh what are you afraid of Sparx, we've got on dangerous adventures before, so lossen up said Spyro. As they walked on the sun was setting. Gosh it's getting late, we better find a place to sleep! exclaimed Brandon. Why won't we sleep in my cave it's just a few miles away. Okay let's go. So Spyro, Sparx, and Brandon ran until they entered the cave. Well at least your cave is roomy said Brandon. My cave is always like this. I see.... well it's getting dark i guess I'm.. *yawn* going to have a little snozze said Brandon. Me too said Sparx. Well good night. As they slept....

Meanwhile at Ziggurat's Space Lair....

heh heh heh, ha ha ha! Sleep tight because you'll need it because I have surprise for you, heh heh heh heh heh! said Ziggurat.

TEXT
End chapter..

I hope that's my best on but it's up to you. See you later, I was going to add humor at the end of the chapter but who cares.
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ih8u2 b lazee
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« Reply #104 on: Jun 30th, 2006, 1:42pm »

on Jun 30th, 2006, 1:34pm, Guest-Brandon Gone Lazy wrote:
I hope that's my best on but it's up to you. See you later, I was going to add humor at the end of the chapter but who cares.


If something don't satisfy you, you should care. sad I hope you're actually enjoying writing and didn't get discouraged.
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