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Brandon Gone Lazy
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« Reply #105 on: Jun 30th, 2006, 6:49pm »

Well okay i will care and try to think it's my best chapter yet and add humor because it's my story.
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diane
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« Reply #106 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 01:59am »

mi stroy has humer 2!!

after spyro n spryi has sexx they went 2 da stor 2 by sumcomdons

the store maneger sed they wer out

so they went 2 da apartmint complec

thy askes the guy their if he has any comdoms

he sed that it was an apratment not a comdominyim

spyro n spriy laffedthen had sexx agen
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Lithe To Disgusted to Log
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« Reply #107 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 11:01am »

Normally, one such as I would never say this but, seeing as this "story" is a disgrace to the universe (not just the fiction universe) I must express my opinion in the only way possible.

AHHEM...

Burn in hell you tastless Censored !
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Brandon Gone Lazy
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« Reply #108 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 12:04pm »

Good one Lithe you sure know how to yell!

Chapter 4 is here

TEXT
Chapter 4: The Big Surprise

When the sun was rising Brandon woke up and walked out of the cave when he saw one of Ziggurat's minions and without knowing it the monster picked up Brandon and ran away. Help! Help! cried Brandon, but it was no use, Spyro and Sparx didn't hear.

3 hours later....

Spyro woked up and noticed Brandon wasn't there. Huh where is Brandon? As he walked over Sparx and woke him up, Sparx have you seen Brandon? No I haven't I've been sleeping the whole time. Huh then where is he? As Spyro walked out of the cave and notice some big foot marks on the ground. Sparx come here it looks like someone took Brandon with him, so let's follow these tracks.

Meanwhile at the entrance of the Spooky Forest, Brandon was all tied up to a tree and the monster who took him laughed, hah hah hah. You won't get away with this, Spyro is going to kick your ass. Oh really well I like to see him try as Spyro and Sparx appeared on the scene. Spyro gasped and said look it's Brandon and the monster who made those giant foot prints, then Spyro walked up to the monster and flamed him. ARGGGGGHHHH! The monster screamed and turned around to look at him. Let go of Brandon! yelled Spyro. hahahah try to stop me, as Brandon finally spoke, come on Spyro, defeat this guy your my only hope....

Dun dun dun... What will you think will happen? Find out Tommorow.
Brandon: Well that's the end of that chapter.
Spyro: Wait a minute your still tied up.
Brandon: Well who cares i can ask a assistant to type the chapter.
Spyro: You don't have a assistant.
Brandon: Well duh... that's why I'm asking you to find a assistance.
Spyro: Forget it.
Brandon: Don't make me kill you when I get out of this tree.
Spyro: No.
Brandon; Oh that's it I'm going to cut 10% percent of your salary.
Spyro: All right, I'll go find one, See you later folks.
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ih8u2 b lazee
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« Reply #109 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 2:44pm »

on Jul 2nd, 2006, 11:01am, Guest-Lithe To Disgusted to Log wrote:
Normally, one such as I would never say this but, seeing as this "story" is a disgrace to the universe (not just the fiction universe) I must express my opinion in the only way possible.

AHHEM...

Burn in hell you tastless Censored !


You may be right, Lithe, but everyone please ignore her. Everytime someone tells her to stop she replies to it.
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Brandon Gone lazy
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« Reply #110 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 3:06pm »

I'm just telling people that my story goes like this for the chapter's

chapter's 1-13
And i changed the ratings since I said ass in the story
Rated T
Action/Adventure/Humor
Oh and by the way i might add romance if you don't mind but that's between 5-10 chapter's
Parrings:
Spyro/Ember
Tounge/Emma
Ember is about to appear soon, I hope i can fit her in
Tounge is about to appear in chapter 9 and so will Emma
Oh and I have one more surprise character let's see you can guess who it is.
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storm
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« Reply #111 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:40pm »

ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahaha

oh god diane, your story made me laugh so hard
condominiums-- thats pure genius!
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Brandon Gone Lazy
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« Reply #112 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:45pm »

Here is a hint: It's character that was made in the Made up character topic.

Is it Croc, Wibbit, Haukle, Ember2 or the other characters that was made
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jaden
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« Reply #113 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:48pm »

u ppl mak me sick!!!!!!!

diane mad a awsom sorty adn u ppl dont liek ithuh? im reportnig u ppol!!!!!!

HAV SUM REPSCT FER DIANE!!!!!!!
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ih8u2 b lazee
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« Reply #114 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:52pm »

on Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:48pm, Guest-jaden wrote:
u ppl mak me sick!!!!!!!

diane mad a awsom sorty adn u ppl dont liek ithuh? im reportnig u ppol!!!!!!

HAV SUM REPSCT FER DIANE!!!!!!!


Please have some respect for the English language. D:. I don't think your allowed to post like that. I read something about it in the FAQ.
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ih8u2 b lazee
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« Reply #115 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:54pm »

on Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:45pm, Guest-Brandon Gone Lazy wrote:
Here is a hint: It's character that was made in the Made up character topic.

Is it Croc, Wibbit, Haukle, Ember2 or the other characters that was made


OMG, I hope its Wiibit! (spelled Wiibit, like the nintendo kinda) She is the best! (yeah, I created her. wish I could post that pic...)
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storm
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« Reply #116 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:55pm »

on Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:52pm, Guest-ih8u2 b lazee wrote:
Please have some respect for the English language. D:. I don't think your allowed to post like that. I read something about it in the FAQ.


speak for yourself, you clumsy fool! you used the wrong homophone!
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Brandon Gone Huh lazy
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« Reply #117 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:56pm »

ahem her story is rated R for sexeual contepts and she misspells every word and you and storm are the only one's who love it but if we read it disgust's us and there is no way it's good but if you have a complaint, I can Swear so badly that no one messes with me, so let that be warning to you Jaden!!!!!!!!! angry angry angry angry
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jaden
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« Reply #118 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 6:59pm »

to ih82u= sry but i dunt CAR ubowt teh Censored er faq er wut evrr so pis of!!!!!!!

to bradnen= im not scard of u u mroon!!!111
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storm
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« Reply #119 on: Jul 2nd, 2006, 7:03pm »

hey guys, dont fight! i dont think the boss of this place would like it.

jaden, you have good points but you gotta chill.
ih8u2, picking fights never gets you anywhere (believe me, i know from experience ^w^)
brandon, swearing is just words, its nothing that anyone would be afraid of.
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